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May 30, 2007 21:35:14 GMT -5
Post by Brambles on May 30, 2007 21:35:14 GMT -5
Neptune's tail lashed behind her in anger as she stepped in frnot of Pehonixfire protectively. A sudden thought burrowed into her mind that almost made her cry out in surprise. Her whole life she had hated the Clan cats, excluding her brother Dragonheart, but here she was, defending not one but two cats of different Clans. Her eyes turned steel cold though as she realized this is what she wanted all along.
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May 30, 2007 21:35:16 GMT -5
Post by ripped. on May 30, 2007 21:35:16 GMT -5
Pheonixfire narrowed his eyes at Hatebreed. "Leave DuneClan now." He hissed threateningly, his neck fur bristling.
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May 30, 2007 21:40:03 GMT -5
Post by warheart on May 30, 2007 21:40:03 GMT -5
Hatebreed didn't wait for anyone else to speak, his gaze was set upon Pheonixfire, his target, nothing else mattered at the moment. Hatebreed sped full force into both Warheart and Neptune, throwing them to either side of the den.
" YOUR MINE! " Hatebreed roared, as he tore his claws into Pheonixstar's neck, and drug the former leader of DuneClan towards himself.
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May 30, 2007 21:41:56 GMT -5
Post by Brambles on May 30, 2007 21:41:56 GMT -5
Neptune whirled around and stared for several heartbeats, her jaws gaping in surprise at Hatebreed's fury. She snarled and yowled a cry of anger, launching herself at Hatebreed in an attempt to drag him away from Pheonixfire.
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May 30, 2007 21:47:05 GMT -5
Post by warheart on May 30, 2007 21:47:05 GMT -5
Hatebreed easily shrugged her off, and continued at Pheonixstars neck.
Warheart pushed herself slowly up, and growled with fury, as she lept at Hatebreed, but the tom dislodged her as well, and sent her back into the den wall.
[ I GTG dont post to much w/o meh! ]
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May 30, 2007 21:48:52 GMT -5
Post by Brambles on May 30, 2007 21:48:52 GMT -5
Neptune stumbled backwards, her limbs trembling at the sight before her. She suddenly lost all hostility that ran through her blood, appaled by what Hatebreed was committing.
Thistleclaw, who was sleeping in the warriors den, heard a yowl from the camp. He urged the other warriors to remain in the den while he stood and pushed his way out...
OOC: mmk byes!!
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May 31, 2007 8:54:20 GMT -5
Post by warheart on May 31, 2007 8:54:20 GMT -5
Warheart's forleg had a long gash in it, and blood trickled down to her paw, she looked around for the cause, and realized it was from a jagged rock sticking out of the side of the den. Warheart managed to clench her teeth as she crawled over towards Neptune to see if she was ok. Warheart looked over at Pheonixfire, and could hardly see either Hatebreed or the former DuneClan leader, pools of blood spilled out from that area, and to much blood was clashing through the air to be able to remotely make out what was happening.
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May 31, 2007 21:51:27 GMT -5
Post by Brambles on May 31, 2007 21:51:27 GMT -5
OOC: uhm, you kind of messed that up. Only Thistleclaw was to find Pehonixfire dead at first, with Warheart and Neptune inside, and he would think they did it even though it was Hatebreed, and he wouldn't know until later Amber.
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Post by ripped. on Jun 2, 2007 8:54:59 GMT -5
OOC: I'm gonna post anyways, lol, I'm back and for now I'll pretend Amber didn't post
Pheonixfire couldn't react at all, everything happened so fast. As Hatebreed sliced at his neck, Pheonixfire had lost two of his remaining 3 lives, and while on his last, he knew his strength was leaving him. He didn't even try to fight back. His golden eyes rested on Warheart for a moment, and whether she looked at him or not, his gaze said extremely clearly, Kill this murderer, do not let him take any more inocent lives. Pheonixfire closed his eyes, his brother Dustfoot standing before him, in DreamClan's realm. Pheonixfire stopped breathing, his body motionless, dead.
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Jun 2, 2007 12:19:14 GMT -5
Post by Brambles on Jun 2, 2007 12:19:14 GMT -5
Neptune hissed at Hatebreed, though the rouge had already left. Yes, they were to have killed Pheonixfire, but spared the elders life, though Hatebreed had other plans. She padded over the Pheonixfire's body, her paws slipping in the blood. She nuzzled the dead cats matted and bloody fur.
Thistleclaw thrust his way into the elders den, his eyes blazing with alaram at the scent of blood that pummled his nose. He let his eyes adjust before making out the shape of two cats and another shape, lying motionless on the ground amidst a pool of blood. He gave a cry of terror and shoved his way to Pheonixfire's lifeless body. Whirling around, he was able to discern the scent of a rouge, and a RageClan cat...Warheart. "You did this!" He yowled.
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Jun 4, 2007 12:31:01 GMT -5
Post by Amber on Jun 4, 2007 12:31:01 GMT -5
OOC: I worked so hard on that! So I'm going to post it again but edited. ^^' Edited right.
"NO!" the cry sounded out and a dark shadow slipped into the den, rushing to the former DuneClan leader. The she-cat was gaping in horror as she stared and blinked, then turned on Warheart and Neptune, tail lashing like a whip. "Murderers!" she hissed, hatred in her voice, eyes flashing with sorrow and rage. It was Stormcloud. Pheonixfire had been the one to accept Stormcloud into the Clan when she was only a young loner, not of Clan blood at all, when her sister Amberheart had died. She couldn't afford another tragic event. Not when things had started to fall back together again. NO! she wailed silently.
A young face appeared past the legs of her father, blinking in astonishment. Sleetkit gaped in dismay, looking up to Thistleclaw uneasily. "Daddy...," came the faint whisper, "Is Pheonixfire...dead?" But the kit already knew it was true. She nosed Pheonixfire, then looked at the two cats silheoutted in the moonlight. "How could you?" she mewled, innocence and youth in her tiny voice.
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Jun 4, 2007 17:27:52 GMT -5
Post by Brambles on Jun 4, 2007 17:27:52 GMT -5
Neptune looked aty Thistleclaw with pain in her eyes. "Hatebreed...I will kill you for the pain you have caused." She hissed loud enough for all the cats gathered to hear. "Warheart, we must go now." She mewed, turning and pushing her way past Thistleclaw, who stared in horror at the site before him.
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Jun 4, 2007 20:23:29 GMT -5
Post by ripped. on Jun 4, 2007 20:23:29 GMT -5
In DreamClan's Realm....
Pheonixfire opened his eyes, his once blood-stained fur now pure, sandy-ginger as it was as he was a leader. "Dustfoot?" He meowed as his brother came before him. "Pheonixfire, DreamClan welcomes you proudly. Sadly, your time came, but you lived a great and noble life." Dustfoot meowed to Pheonixfire. Then Dustfoot flicked his tail to a pool of water. "Look into the pool, you will see Thistleclaw, and a few others." Pheonixfire looked as said, and indeed saw the scene he left behind, reflecting off his golden eyes.
In DuneClan...
Smokepaw stirred in the apprentice's den, sleepily lifting her head. She snapped awake at Thistleclaw's yowl, coming from the elder's den. Fear clawed at her belly; she knew something must've happened to Pheonixfire. She got to her paws, padding over to the elder's den across camp. "Thistleclaw, is something--" Smokepaw cut herself off with a small gasp at the sight of Pheonixfire's bloody body. He wasn't moving. Her eyes watered, knowing he was dead--the cat who let her in DuneClan as a weak, defenseless and blind kit.
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Jun 4, 2007 22:10:10 GMT -5
Post by Brambles on Jun 4, 2007 22:10:10 GMT -5
Thistleclaw's head hung low in agony f losing his dear friend. "Pheonixfire, if you can hear me, I will never let you down." He vowed, his amber eyes blazing with a cold fury.
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Jun 5, 2007 15:47:04 GMT -5
Post by ripped. on Jun 5, 2007 15:47:04 GMT -5
Pheonixfire looked to his brother Dustfoot, away from the pool. "I want to go by Thistleclaw, let him know I'm still there with him." He meowed to the older DreamClan warrior, who nodded, and replied, "You may go." Within a few moments, Pheonixfire's spirit was sitting in the elder's den, where he wouldn't spend any more nights. He got to his paws, padding over to Thistleclaw's living form, even though Pheonixfire couldn't talk properly to the deputy unless he was asleep. "Thistleclaw---Thistleclaw, I'm here with you still. Lead DuneClan well." Pheonixfire mewed to the deputy, trying to get the tom to hear him in his mind. "It was Hatebreed---He's still out there!" Pheonixfire tried desperately, but knew it didn't get through.
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