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Post by whitetiger on May 20, 2008 21:45:46 GMT -5
Introduction:Oceapearl dead, hard to say? It should be, a great warrior and a loving mother died from blood loss. Clawed by a fox, not a very good picture. No one knows what happened to oceanpearl except the fox and her. No chance of getting information on what hapened, or is there a unkown cat who saw this who can tell what happened, Most likely not. But how hard can it be to already know your going to die before you even get close to dieing. Oceanpearl was a great mother even though she lost one of her daughters, weatherkit, she still was good mother to her other two kits. She's gone and here nothing that can bring her back, or is there? -----End of introduction-----(Sorry I'm trying to practice for writing the third book in the series I'm creating.)
Angel could smell something wrong before anyone entered the camp, she ran to the entrance as fast as she could with being pregnant. She saw and backed away with sorrow on her face."She's gone" she whispered.
Blackwolf ran to see what she whispered and what about.He wished he didn't. Blackwolf saw his old friend, dead and torn up.He sat down because he felt dissy.
Whitewolf came to see what her brother was shocked about, but when she saw,something in her emotion was unusal, she showed no emotion, no sorrow, no sadness, no shock, nothing.
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Post by Flamey on May 20, 2008 22:00:56 GMT -5
Moonshadow said nothing. He lay down Oceanpearl's body gently on the ground. He sat down beside her, unable to utter a single word.
Goldentail ran out of the warrior's den as fast as he could. He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw a familiar shape lying on the ground. Slowly, he approached the group of cats, his tail drooping and his head down. He sat down silently, like Moonshadow, unable to say anything. [/size][/color]
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Post by rem<EMBER me on May 25, 2008 11:46:21 GMT -5
A thin, dark tabby figure seemed to glide out of the leader's den. Jasminestar's green eyes were bright until she saw the figure in the middle of the clearing. Oceanpearl. A sickening feeling began to rise in her stomach as she gazed at the battered body. She turned to Moonshadow and asked, "What happened?"
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Post by whitetiger on May 25, 2008 14:49:14 GMT -5
Angel began to wail in pain."Why her? She didn't deserve to die."
Blackwolf stared at the body of oceanpearl while he spoke."From the claw...marks it looks like a fox did this to her. Moonshadow, were you there when this happened to her?"
Whitewolf turned to her brother."Blackwolf, if moonshadow was there oceanpearl would not be dead right now." She then turned to moonshadow."When you saw her was she already dead or was she dieing?If she was dieing did she say anything before she died?"
Angel turned to whitewolf."Whitewolf, he just lost his mother, do you really expect him to answer your questions?"
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Post by Flamey on May 25, 2008 20:20:32 GMT -5
Moonshadow continued staring at his mother's body. "I wasn't there when it happened. I should have been. Then this would have never happened. She was dieing when I saw her. She did say something before she died." he hesitated at the last part. What would the clan do to him if they found out. "She said that she loves her family and will see them when the time comes." he said, remembering the words perfectly clear. He decided it was best that no one except him knew about Paula. [/size][/color]
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