Post by whitetiger on Dec 16, 2007 17:52:46 GMT -5
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Ivorystorm ran through the spirit jungle, hoping Twilight and sunset were behind her. She suddenly heard Sunset's cry."Ivorystorm, keep running!!!Don't look back!!!" Tears started comming to ivorystorms eyes.
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Sunset was giving medicine to a stray loner, that needed help. The loner just ate the herbs she gave him, that was all.
Ivorystorm spoke to the loner."What attacked you??"
The loner closed his eyes and cried. Sunset spoke."From what I observe this can only be caused by one kind of animal, but it can't be possible."
Twilight spoke now."What can't be possible? What is the only animal that could have done this?"
Sunset was silent for a long moment."Dogs" she whispered finally.
Ivorystorm froze, but not at the name of the animal, but the scent she scented when sunset said dogs. She didn't reconize it.
Twilight stood and turned around. She screamed."Get the loner and run!!!"
Ivorystorm saw the four dogs that Twilight saw."Oh my."
Twilight screamed at them again."Run!!!!"
Ivorystorm turned the other way and ran as fast as she could. She looked back and sunset was behind her. She didn't see twilight. Suddenly she saw twilight and the four dogs close behind trying to snap at twilights tail. She turned back around and kept running.
Ivorystorm ran through the spirit jungle, hoping Twilight and sunset were behind her. She suddenly heard Sunset's cry."Ivorystorm, keep running!!!Don't look back!!!" Tears started comming to ivorystorms eyes. She triped and hit the hard ground.
Sunset tried to push up ivorystorm, but she was too weak from running. Suddenly she felt a sharpe pain in her back and also felt her self being lifted from the ground. She then saw blood drop below her, she knew it was her blood. She screamed in pain, and the scream ecohed and traveled far through the forest. Surley someone heard her.
Ivorystorm came back to her senses. She felt a drop of blood hit her tail and she looked up to see sunset dangling from a dogs mouth, The other three dogs were still running this way trying to catch twilight. Ivorystorm flung herself at the dogs face."Let go of her!!!"
Sunset felt the dog losen it's grip but it did not let go. The dog was crushing her rips and stomach.
Twilight was on another dog trying to distract all three of the other ones. The dog that twilight was on was trying to shake her off and the other two dogs were trying to snap at her and get her off to kill her.
Ivorystorm ran through the spirit jungle, hoping Twilight and sunset were behind her. She suddenly heard Sunset's cry."Ivorystorm, keep running!!!Don't look back!!!" Tears started comming to ivorystorms eyes.
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Sunset was giving medicine to a stray loner, that needed help. The loner just ate the herbs she gave him, that was all.
Ivorystorm spoke to the loner."What attacked you??"
The loner closed his eyes and cried. Sunset spoke."From what I observe this can only be caused by one kind of animal, but it can't be possible."
Twilight spoke now."What can't be possible? What is the only animal that could have done this?"
Sunset was silent for a long moment."Dogs" she whispered finally.
Ivorystorm froze, but not at the name of the animal, but the scent she scented when sunset said dogs. She didn't reconize it.
Twilight stood and turned around. She screamed."Get the loner and run!!!"
Ivorystorm saw the four dogs that Twilight saw."Oh my."
Twilight screamed at them again."Run!!!!"
Ivorystorm turned the other way and ran as fast as she could. She looked back and sunset was behind her. She didn't see twilight. Suddenly she saw twilight and the four dogs close behind trying to snap at twilights tail. She turned back around and kept running.
Ivorystorm ran through the spirit jungle, hoping Twilight and sunset were behind her. She suddenly heard Sunset's cry."Ivorystorm, keep running!!!Don't look back!!!" Tears started comming to ivorystorms eyes. She triped and hit the hard ground.
Sunset tried to push up ivorystorm, but she was too weak from running. Suddenly she felt a sharpe pain in her back and also felt her self being lifted from the ground. She then saw blood drop below her, she knew it was her blood. She screamed in pain, and the scream ecohed and traveled far through the forest. Surley someone heard her.
Ivorystorm came back to her senses. She felt a drop of blood hit her tail and she looked up to see sunset dangling from a dogs mouth, The other three dogs were still running this way trying to catch twilight. Ivorystorm flung herself at the dogs face."Let go of her!!!"
Sunset felt the dog losen it's grip but it did not let go. The dog was crushing her rips and stomach.
Twilight was on another dog trying to distract all three of the other ones. The dog that twilight was on was trying to shake her off and the other two dogs were trying to snap at her and get her off to kill her.