Visiting(anyone)

[whitetiger]

Ivory steped across the border into blazeclan territory with twilight and sunset beside her. Ivory had been training with twilight and sunset for 5 moons now. She was almost a full loner. She couldn't wait to see her mother and father.She also wanted to see her brother and sister. She stopped once she heard a hiss.

Twilight and sunset stayed calm.

Ivory looked a lot different than the last time she was in blazeclan territory. Her pelt was warmer, softer, sleek, and a bit darker shade. Ivory was different , but she still had the same soft gaze.

[Squid]

Chancepaw's fur was bristling as he stared at three loners from a bush. He knew who they were but he was in no mood to even see them right now, especially Ivory. For moons now Breaker and Torridheart had been hanging out with Chancepaw, showing him different techniques of hunting and fighting. They now sat behind the apprentice, hidden, watching Sunset and Twilight.

[whitetiger]

Ivory turned."Hi chancepaw, you are mad at me aren't you?"Ivory dipped her head as she frowned,

Sunset scented the air."Breaker?!"

Twilight stayed calm while her sister jumped in exitment.

[Squid]

Chancepaw stayed silent, his eyes narrowed "Your the one who assumed as much" He turned around to look at Breaker and Torridheart "Come on, lets go try that new fighting move!" He took off in the direction to a clearing. Breaker took one last glance at the three she-cats then him and Torridheart followed Chancepaw.

[whitetiger]

Ivory's tail droped."I wish it could be different."

Sunset frowned when breaker left.She wispered."Breaker?"

Twilight pressed her flank against her sisters lightly.The turned to another bush when she heard rustling.

Hurricanepelt steped out of the bush infront of the toms."Chancepaw, You should know better not to talk to your sister that. She left the clan, but she is still your sister. You don't even know why she left."

Sunset was still frowning she thought to herself.....Why breaker, why did you turn away from me, are you upset with me......it was ivory's choice and her mother thought she would do better with us than becomeing a warrior. A tear fell down sunsets face.

[Squid]

Chancepaw tripped and fell in surprise when Hurricanepelt appeared "Great DreamClan! Well...thats one way to sneak up on a cat, jump out of the bushes when he least expects it" He rolled his eyes, standing up. "I do not care for Ivory anymore, she chose to leave and it is none of my business" Besides... He thought With her out of the clan I can become the greatest fighter here. Breaker's different colored eyes were narrowed and his ears swiveled back for any sign of movement.

[whitetiger]

Ivory looked up.
"I left..... i left because i knew......that if i stayed i would become a great warrior, but not a great warrior at heart. A cat as diffrent destinys i could of become a great warrrior but i would have any joy, if i left the clan i would become a loner warrior, with joy of running in the forest not worrying about borders. I knew becoming a clan warrior wasen't right for me. I never fit in with the other kits, i never fit in with the personality a warrior should have, i never fit in with my own family. I also left so you could become the great warrior of the family after mom and dad, and hopepaw would become a great medicine cat. There was nothing left for me to own, for me to be proud of one thing. I'am proud to be a loner, you can be proud warrior now with me gone, hopepaw can be a proud of being a medicine cat. I choose this, being a loner is my only choice, it is better to be only one great warrior in the family than two, that warrior is you chancepaw. I may be good at fighting, but it wasen't where my heart belonged. I'am glad that i left, but i'am sad to not see you and hopepaw, mother and father too, but i will alway visit."

Sunset had to say sorry to breaker for what he thought or she thought she did to him. She ran up to breaker."I'm sorry, please forgive me?"

Twilight sat down, she was sad she didn't have anyone to care about like sunset or ivory. She slowly frowned as she took a deep breath.


Hurricanepelt smiled at twilight and sunset.

[Squid]

By the time Ivory was finished Chancepaw had already disappeared hopefully without anyone else noticing. Breaker didnt answer Sunset, when Chancepaw became an apprentice, he'd agreed to train him, to show no emotion towards weaker cats and show no mercy in battle. He stood up and went after Chancepaw, who was heading for BlazeClan camp.

[whitetiger]

Ivory turned to her mother."It good to see you mom."

Hurricanepelt nodded."Same to you, I'm geussing you will be leaving now."

Sunset stared after breaker for a moment and then walked out of blazeclan territory crying and thinking.....How could he?......I will never fall in love again.......It's just too hard....I can't do it again........This is my first fight with breaker......Is it over for good?

Twilight looked at ivory and her mother."Yeah, at least me and sunset will, i don't know about ivory."

Ivory nooded."I'm comming, it clear that i'm not wanted here anymore. I will visit again, please tell hopepaw and brokenstorm i'll miss them and i will visit again someday and tell chancepaw i will really miss him and that i hope he becomes the greatest warrior ever."

Hurricanepelt smiled again."I will, i will miss you ivory. Good-bye."

Ivory smiled as her mother called her by her loner name."Thank."She wispered and walked away with twilight beside her.

Twilight looked back."We will take care of her, don't worry."

Hurricanepelt nodded."I know you will."

Then the 3 she-cats were out of sight into the wild forest of the loners. Hurricanepelt left towards the camp, but also scenting the air for fresh kill to take back to the camp.