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Amber
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Rate my poem! May 7, 2007 20:30:25 GMT -5

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Post by Amber on May 7, 2007 20:30:25 GMT -5

"Somewhere....
Over the mountains
Across the valleys
Across the sea

Somewhere....
Someone is out there
Out past the mountains
Waiting for me

Somewhere...
All past the rivers
Over the oceans
There is a key

Somewhere...
That special someone
The key to my true love
Is waiting for me"

Rate it on a 1-10 scale (described in the answers) and please post what you voted...thanks.

demon Guest	Rate my poem! May 7, 2007 20:31:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by demon on May 7, 2007 20:31:56 GMT -5 I voted 9!!

flicker Guest	Rate my poem! May 7, 2007 20:38:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by flicker on May 7, 2007 20:38:07 GMT -5 Awsome! Voted 9 :3 I can't write poems XD

.feather//oceana. Administrator the abortion plan & my sport is your sport's punishment Posts: 2,509	Rate my poem! May 7, 2007 21:47:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by .feather//oceana. on May 7, 2007 21:47:28 GMT -5 Awwh So Cute Amber, 9/10. It's a little short.
	.Something didn't want you to live in me//my body rejected you. you don't belong to me]]. & after the body's cleaned they have to make room for me to s l e e p)) [/center]

moonfur Guest	Rate my poem! May 8, 2007 11:49:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by moonfur on May 8, 2007 11:49:36 GMT -5 I voted 9

Squid Full Administrator annihilated Posts: 2,581	Rate my poem! May 12, 2007 16:58:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Squid on May 12, 2007 16:58:08 GMT -5 I vote 10, I liked it very much!

[Grotesque Burlesque.]
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Rate my poem! Jun 6, 2007 11:57:46 GMT -5

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Post by [Grotesque Burlesque.] on Jun 6, 2007 11:57:46 GMT -5

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Blow out the candles
On all my frankensteins.
At least my death wish will come true.
You taste like Valentine's, and we cry,
You're like a birthday.
I should have picked the photograph
It lasted longer than you.
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whitetiger Guest	Rate my poem! Jun 23, 2007 19:06:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by whitetiger on Jun 23, 2007 19:06:27 GMT -5 10!!!

dove TCOTF Best Warrior Churrleader! :) Posts: 1,676	Rate my poem! Jun 2, 2008 18:13:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by dove on Jun 2, 2008 18:13:59 GMT -5 oops, meant 9 i wasn't paying attention to what i clicked, MY BAD XP
	Yet I feel my heart is aching Though it doesn't beat it's breaking I know that I am dead Yet it seems that I still have some tears to shed.

Post by Amber on May 7, 2007 20:30:25 GMT -5

Post by demon on May 7, 2007 20:31:56 GMT -5

Post by flicker on May 7, 2007 20:38:07 GMT -5

Post by .feather//oceana. on May 7, 2007 21:47:28 GMT -5

Post by moonfur on May 8, 2007 11:49:36 GMT -5

Post by Squid on May 12, 2007 16:58:08 GMT -5

Post by [Grotesque Burlesque.] on Jun 6, 2007 11:57:46 GMT -5

Post by whitetiger on Jun 23, 2007 19:06:27 GMT -5

Post by dove on Jun 2, 2008 18:13:59 GMT -5

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